July 11 Sec Club - First Rough Block

here's my first rough blocking pass for this month's 11 sec club. The idea is that this Kid is in the Principal's office thinking he's going to get yelled at over a funny picture he's drawn but it turns out that the principal actually quite likes it!

This pass was originally done in plateau, but playblasted in spline as I thought it may come across clearer; The aim of this is really just as a starting point to try and get the timing down more than anything else, with the poses blocked in as simple as possible for the idea to come across.

obviously there's a lot to do in terms of refining the poses breakdowns etc. (not to mention doing some reaction on the kid) but now the acting and timing is hopefully locked down things can start moving along to getting this one in for entry.

any feedback appreciated :)